Quadrille Monday

Lillian over at Quadrille Monday at dVerse has provided us the prompt “spoil”.  We are to use it in a quadrille.  This is a poem of 44 words with no particular rhyme scheme or rhythm.

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You spoiled me.
You gave me everything I could ever want or need.
I fell head over heels in love with you.

Conquest made,
You could no longer stand the mistress you had styled.
You threw me away like a spoiled piece of meat.

©November 2018 Suzanne G. McClendon

 

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About Suzanne Gunter McClendon

I am a South Carolina native, but have been living on the Texas Gulf Coast for 14 years now. David and I have been married for 34 years. Our children are grown. Some are here at home, others are out in the big world doing their "thing". I enjoy genealogy, reading, writing, photography, digital art, fiber arts, cooking and much, much more.
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23 Responses to Quadrille Monday

  1. Janice says:

    A sad tale with great contrast in the first and second stanzas using different meanings of spoil.

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  2. lillian says:

    Oh….this is NOT a nice person!
    Isn’t that the truth though, in some relationships? People try to mold a person into someone they love…in those instances, somehow, the clay always begins to droop (so to speak).

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    • I agree. I think it is also a power trip for some people. They enjoy destroying the hearts of others. It is an awful thing.
      I appreciate your clay reference. My forefathers were potters and I hope to be one some day.

      Have a blessed day and a very Happy Thanksgiving.😊

      Like

  3. Comedy Plus says:

    Very well done and I know a few folks that do this very thing. So sad to watch.

    Have a fabulous day. ♥

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  4. Frank Hubeny says:

    Well described these two versions of being spoiled.

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  5. Alas there are some who cannot see it different than a game…
    But maybe it is better than those who keep you captive with their fists.

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  6. 15andmeowing says:

    Well done 🙂

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  7. Lona Gynt says:

    This heroine does seem to realize that it is not her, it’s him. He might think she’s disposable, spoiled, but she is not the one who stinks. Wonderful precise symmetry and turning of the POV, same word, profound antithetical shift, lands square.

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  8. Gina says:

    using spoil twice to tell two sides of the story, very nice

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  9. Vanessence says:

    That is some wonderful writing there! Packs a powerful punch!

    xoxox ❤

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